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    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Overall composition.

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    To bring out the uniqueness of the buildings].

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    I was taking photos of the famous night landscape on the other side of the river, until i turn ard and saw the MBS behind. Probably the onli guy pointing his camera at the opposite direction haha.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    i tink there can be improvements but cant really pin point

    thanks for ur advices in advance!
    Last edited by knoxknocks; 6th October 2010 at 12:47 AM.

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    Default Re: MBS

    Hi,

    In terms of overall composition, there is much to be improved on. MBS is obscured by the convention center in front. Since the 3 MBS towers are your focus, this angle is a bad one. The horizon in the photo, though not visible, is also tilted. This takes away more from your composition.

    Hope this helps,
    AC
    Olympian

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    Default Re: MBS

    (1) The whole image looks cluttered.
    (2) Nothing unique.
    (3) Everything looks cut off at the corners.
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    Default Re: MBS

    You should try to think about what you're shooting before you compose.
    If you want to photograph the MBS towers, then you should try to showcase them without having other distracting elements around or in front.

    Since they are structures, you should avoid having them tilted, unless it is for some abstract artistic purpose.
    Also beware that you have very bright lights in the foreground (on the right), which are blown.
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    Default Re: MBS

    thanks guys. guess i have much to do. will try to get a better shot next time!

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