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    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    - Black and White photography
    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    - improvement of taking black and white photos
    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    - inspire by a wedding photo i come across
    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    - room for improvement



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    Personally, I find the composition alright.

    Maybe you need to do some extra work, like burning & dodging certain areas to make the staircase(burning) & the people(dodge) stand out. Contrast & sharpness could be stlightly higher also.

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    woot! thanks , will do more touch up on the pic. (:

    any else?

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    Default Re: Spiral

    actually i think you don't really need the people in there..

    if you had planned it that is..

    becos its a really nice shot!
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    nice. one suggestion - i would have shot it dead centre so that you dont get distortion.

    where is this staircase btw?

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    Quote Originally Posted by pokiemon View Post
    nice. one suggestion - i would have shot it dead centre so that you dont get distortion.

    where is this staircase btw?
    looks like chinese garden

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    Personally i like it when the peoples are there, it brings life and subject
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    good use of pattern and curve to lead eye into picture -

    suggest crop + vignetting and slight cloning to minimize distractions.


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    Quote Originally Posted by night86mare View Post
    good use of pattern and curve to lead eye into picture -

    suggest crop + vignetting and slight cloning to minimize distractions.

    thanks alot people (:

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    Nice composition. Perhaps the contrast could be improve. Otherwise well done!

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