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    1. in what area is critique to be sought?

    mainly on feel and composition

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

    i hope i can achieve a little of myserious feel with this peice of work.

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

    i was playing around with candles and the idea of a hallway form up by candles might look nice..,so i attempt to set it up and took this.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

    i didnt think much of it as i shoot it according to my feel..,but on the overall..,it gives me a sense of mystery.
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    Default Re: the candescent hallway

    To me the front two candles are not aligned with each other.
    Don't know whether is it an illusion or not. =/

    But still nice shot! =D

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    nice~!!

    but i think to add some mystery you need to have it not too dark... maybe slightly can make out a shadow of sth or the back ground... now it just shows the lights..
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    Quote Originally Posted by crystal1993 View Post
    To me the front two candles are not aligned with each other.
    Don't know whether is it an illusion or not. =/

    But still nice shot! =D
    thanks alot..!,yea did notice that too..,maybe ought to straighten the alignment when i take such shots in the future

    Quote Originally Posted by enzeru21 View Post
    nice~!!

    but i think to add some mystery you need to have it not too dark... maybe slightly can make out a shadow of sth or the back ground... now it just shows the lights..
    heya thanks!,actually i darken it because on the background is mycupboard..,and it looks very distracting.,maybe try such shots on a bigger area already..,thanks for your opinion.

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    nice shot

    but i would like something to be infocus...
    cause now i dont have anything to focus on so its a blurr image

    there is smthing harry above the last 2 candles... do watch out for that, if u print it out in a large scale, you will be able to see it

    but nice concept

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