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    1. In which area is critique or feedback to be given?
    - Composition of the photo and the overall focus/aperture settings to improve on

    2. What were you hoping to achieve with this image?
    - Give a perspective of where this wall of fliers is at with the rubbish bin. Was intending to include more people walking in the background, but seems restricted by the camera.

    3. Under what circumstance was the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    - Taken at 2pm in Little India. The camera i am using is a Yashica GSN with Kodak 400 film. ISO at 400, aperture at F11. No pp was done.

    4. Thread-starter's personal thoughts about the image.
    - Was at the side of the road, avoiding cars coming from behind. Had trouble ensuring the lady in poster is within frame, yet not taken too flat to allow people walking along the street to be included in the picture. ultimately, i should have included more pedestrians.
    Last edited by knoxknocks; 5th September 2010 at 02:16 PM.

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    i think the distraction dilutes the image somewhat....with the far right a little distracting....and that little piece of overexposed sky

    good idea with 'leaning' the poster lady against the left border tho
    shaddap and just shoot .... up close
    Walkeast

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    i think remove the STOP sign and green bin. will be good.

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    Thanks! now that you guys point out the distractions, it makes a whole lot of sense!

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