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    Default my first photoshoot

    http://www.pbase.com/pysl/inbox




    pls comments and criticise (skills only, not my bride. hee)

    dun worry, i can accept blunt remarks as i am learning.

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    what cam did u used

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    gee...you seem desperate for comments...
    then try this...post your selected photos for comments into the forum
    from what i see, most would comment freely if a threader post photos into the forum.
    If pbase can't hotlink, then try www.photobucket.com , its the best so far.

    for your shots...the best of the lot is DSC_1556.JPG
    but prefer to clone off the drain and crop wisely to focus on the bride.
    and crop this one too: DSC_1583.JPG - focus on the bride.
    Maybe do a sepia tone for DSC_1567.JPG would be nice.

    the only one out is DSC_1574.JPG ... you tried to put emphasis on the tall pillar.

    and btw...congrats...that u r married...he he he

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    nice mood. all the shots

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    I am using Nikon D70 camera.

    I am desperate for comments bcos I love to learn

    Oh, so posting pics is better than posting URL right?

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    BTW, i reduced the resolution drastically. thus, it is not the camera fault but my fault if u see blurry images

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    eh, you migrated from HWZ ar? hahaha..

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    DSC_1539.JPG left end.. Maybe can crop to remove the excess area there..

    DSC_1556.JPG focus on the tree behind instead of her? haha..

    DSC_1574.JPG, i was looking at the pillar instead of the bride =x.. Try using fill flash?

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    Thanks for your comments.

    Think the PIllar really needs to be cropped. hee

    I am also from HWZ forum. Always the same nick - actually not nick as it is my name. hee

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