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    1. in what area is critique to be sought?

    The composure of the image and the colour.

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

    I hope to achieve a sense of sadness of the image. Seeing a tree which is slowly rotting away as the days goes by.

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

    it was a hot shiny day. When the sun was at its best. I had the set my shutter to 1/400 f 7.0. And i was kinda pissed of bout something. That made me took this image.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

    Well, i think tat i manage to get what i wanted from the image. Which is "Isolation" Being isolated from rich soil, being isolated from other tress, being isolated on the edge of a beach.

    Thank you in advance for looking at my picture.

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    Default Re: Isolation

    first impressions.... the tree seems to be a little cramped on the left ?

    nice touch with the slight color tone and vignetting effect but yes, that is a moody image
    shaddap and just shoot .... up close
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    I personally feel that 'isolation' wasn't brought out really well.

    isolation is a kind of contrast. but there's only one tree there. ok, u said "Being isolated from rich soil, being isolated from other tress, being isolated on the edge of a beach.", but sorry, I can't see that in the picture. and this is a pretty tight frame, so I can't really see this tree standing alone on the long stretch (if there's any) beach.

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    the picture is cropped too tightly on the left..

    either give more breathing space on the left or remove the tree..
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    Default Re: Isolation

    Yes, I feel sadness when I see this photo. I think you have more or less acheived your objective according to "2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?"

    But in terms of "isolation", I think HelloNiHao has raised a valid point which I had missed initially when looking at the photo. This photo does meet your objective of "sadness", except that in terms of "isolation", somehow it is too tightly composed/'cropped away at the left' to convince viewers about this point. Yes, I can see it is isolated from rich soil.

    It's not bad as a concept picture; A good attempt. Anyway, this kind of representation may not be as easy as a pure landscape photo(pretty straightforward) in which it's main purpose is to show the beauty of light, color & composition........ You need really convincing points to make a statement.

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