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an attempt shot of a beggar sitting outside a temple in Malacca
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u cauaht the mood very well.....tts wat u call the deciding moment...between a good photo and a not so good one.,..
but if can see more of the face would be better... |
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When will ppl stop taking bad pictures of the under-previleged. There is absolutely no connection between the photographer and the person in the picture. A classic snap shot taken in a sense of urgency and fear. Click and walk. Technically, the image lacks any kind of punch.
Don't take this as a personal tirade, but good street shots are very difficult to take. The major issue is the lack of emotion in the images. There are a number of mediocre images in this genre and few outstanding works. The difference is primarily in the way the photographer approaches the subjects. Your image is one of indifference and has a very tourist quality. Hope you can think about these next time you go out for a shoot. my 2c. |
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it is not a good shot........
the height from it is taken is called the 1.5m syndrome, you're practically standing and looking down at him..... totally detached, and as pointed out, there is nothing that links, the subject with the background and also their relation to you. |
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You should've gone lower.
Then waited for him to make eye contact with you. |
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bro, time to buy your 70-200
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no lah, he keep saying he wants to get the lens mah. so now he couldnt get the face of the man, i think cause he afraid to approach him, so i say its time for him to spend his money lo.
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hmm.... "emotional connection" .... wonder what that means?
when i look at the pic, i see that the beggar looks happy, so there is the emotion of "happiness". but beggars are usually sad, so as the viewer, i am intrigued why this beggar is happy. does that count as an "emotional connection" ? |
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Me very bad in using long len for street shoot. ![]() |
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Zaren:
It is very difficult for me to imagine (from the picture) that the person is happy. Looks like he is shouting at someone Anyway, my point on 'lack of connection' is because I do not have an avenue to move into the picture. There is no entrance. Typically, eyes are a good emoting feature and lets the viewer enter the frame and explore the rest of the image. This is not necessarily true too. You may have environmental portraits that lets you feel the soroundings when you look at the image. For example: http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=2332954 http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=2329520 Both are eye-level shots by the same photographer. No eyes. I like the first one better than the second (though, I like both). I guess the pictures show that the photog was bolder and that makes the images stand out. cheers |
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The first pic is interesting. I like your comments, more analytical than the typical "lighting and composition are good". Thanks.
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