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    Default Potrait of a Rat (toy)

    Gd evening every1 im pretty new to photography.. was playing around with my cam and shot this pic of my rat stuff toy from IKEA.. shot with a pentax k-x, post-processed with lightroom



    exif:
    iso: 400
    aperture: F4.5
    shutter speed: 1/13s

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Composition, overall potrait feel

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    As a practice for shooting potrait shots, I gave it a shot and hope for C&C to see how can i furthur inprove

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Was just fiddling with my cam in my bedroom in the middle of the afternoon when i took the shot

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    I think the fur of the rat is a lil soft

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    Default Re: Potrait of a Rat (toy)

    like the bokeh and the fact that you have brought life into a toy

    composition is nicely placed imho

    just didnt like that whisker to be cut off (i am being anal today ha ha)


    p/s if only there was some catchlight in its eyes ha ha ha !!!

    Last edited by ed9119; 9th August 2010 at 11:14 AM.
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    Default Re: Potrait of a Rat (toy)

    Could have re-arranged the pillow in the BG... kinda distracts a lil IMO. ditto with the whiskers being cut off...
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    Default Re: Potrait of a Rat (toy)

    oo thx for ur comments.. guess the wiskers was abit of a disappointment will take note of it next time haha.. thx again

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