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    hi all, just to share my shoot below...(only one)


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    not bad for a newbie! although the water splashes is not sharp (not sure if sharp is the correct word to use here) enough to me.

    but i cannot comment much haha since i never done such shoots before, perhaps one day i will try.

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    Just my 2 cents worth of comments. I find the red of the strawberries overly-saturated that it loses the details of the fruit surface. And the glass is a bit tilted to the left. Would have been nice if the glass is upright. Also, the exterior of the glass has some water droplets. I would have cleaned the glass exterior so that it looks cleaner in terms of feel. Maybe a faster shutter or higher ISO would have helped reduced the blurring of the water droplets.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sinned79 View Post
    not bad for a newbie! although the water splashes is not sharp (not sure if sharp is the correct word to use here) enough to me.

    but i cannot comment much haha since i never done such shoots before, perhaps one day i will try.
    Quote Originally Posted by kaxdd View Post
    Just my 2 cents worth of comments. I find the red of the strawberries overly-saturated that it loses the details of the fruit surface. And the glass is a bit tilted to the left. Would have been nice if the glass is upright. Also, the exterior of the glass has some water droplets. I would have cleaned the glass exterior so that it looks cleaner in terms of feel. Maybe a faster shutter or higher ISO would have helped reduced the blurring of the water droplets.
    Thanks for the input...i will try to improve as mentioned.

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    Quote Originally Posted by yumyum View Post
    many thanks....

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    any flash used?sorry cant spot it however its a good try. well done! keep up bro

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cjhnsn View Post
    any flash used?sorry cant spot it however its a good try. well done! keep up bro
    internal flash from camera used...

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