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Old 9th May 2004   #1
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Old 10th May 2004   #2
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1.can crop off more of the bottom
2. this a fast moment candid? if not can use lower angle for more impact
3.leaf is of just the right size
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Old 10th May 2004   #3
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agree with clive here... crop off till the chair in front disappears can already i think...
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Old 10th May 2004   #4
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thanks for your comments, clive and nickmak. i have cropped away more of the bottom and posted the edited pic above.
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Old 10th May 2004   #5
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zaren, sorry to interrupt... why post the edited version to replace the original picture? As I see it now, comments left by clive and nickmak no longer make any sense...

It would be good to show side by side comparison....
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Old 11th May 2004   #6
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ok jas, here's the original pic...

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Your original image has greater relevance to your title as it gives more space around the subject(sense of personal space?) and also has a better sense of balance in the image.

The cropped version is neither here nor there, being a little loose for a conventional portrait and too tight to fit in with your caption.
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Old 11th May 2004   #8
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i prefer the original one.


come on people say crop you really go and crop...
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I think I said crop the bottom slightly because the bench at the bottom is a bit distracting because it does not lead the eye to the subject and then on to the leaf... If the bench can push straight then can... But its a candid shot so not studio here... hehe..
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