Results 1 to 10 of 10

Thread: Summer Time in China

  1. #1

    Default Summer Time in China

    Sharing you my photos of Wei Hai, Shandong China. C&C are welcome.
    The place is Cheng Shan Tou Rongcheng China.
    Most eastern part of china
    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Post Processing and Composition
    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    I want to show the viewers how nice is the place where i have gone this past few days and hope to come back here again.
    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken?
    I took this picture coz i feel warmth and excitement when i came to travel this place.
    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture?
    I like this picture coz i feel that it gives a description of the pace where to unwind and relax



    [IMG][/IMG]

  2. #2
    Member
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    East
    Posts
    293

    Default Re: Summer Time in China

    1) Your photo is over-sharpening; quite a lot of noise.
    2) Watch out for the far end horizon
    3) Composition not bad, however, the lower right portion is quite distracting.
    4) The temple on the right has been chopped into half. May be it's good to show the whole building.

    Good attempt, keep it up

  3. #3

    Default Re: Summer Time in China

    In terms of composition, what do you intend the viewers to focus on within the frame?

  4. #4

    Default Re: Summer Time in China

    thanks kutten, i was on the cable car when i took the photo, i dont have much space coz i was only given a small opening on the window to take it. m still here in china, still got 2 days left for the trip.

  5. #5

    Default Re: Summer Time in China

    the beach side with the nature around it, dont have like this in singapore lol! love this place. will post more for u! Thanks!

  6. #6
    Member
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Location
    Right behind you. :P
    Posts
    238

    Default Re: Summer Time in China

    Toooooo.... Can't express out in letter The picture jut looks weird. Should i say that it is blur? The line between te sea and land, seems just too fake.

    Wait!!!! is it a tilt-shift shot?
    Cheers
    Last edited by xxdoggyxx; 30th July 2010 at 06:54 PM.
    They Prefer MasterCard. But I Prefer VISA.

  7. #7

    Default Re: Summer Time in China

    its not a fake shot, its just too hazy that day in Shandong!!! See for yourself, probably u want to go with me next time i travel Shandong!

  8. #8
    Member gymak90's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    The Far North
    Posts
    1,448

    Default Re: Summer Time in China

    Quote Originally Posted by jayceecast View Post
    its not a fake shot, its just too hazy that day in Shandong!!! See for yourself, probably u want to go with me next time i travel Shandong!
    If it's a gloomy or hazy day, then probably that won't be a good day for landscape photography.

    From your shot, it seems that has been enlarged. I can't see much sharpness in the photo. Colours are a bit too intense/saturated, hence it looks unnatural.

    The trees at the bottom of the frame, to me, is a distraction and should be removed.

    More of the sea should be shown. Also the horizon is tilted

    My 2 cents
    The best things in life are free.

  9. #9
    Senior Member denniskee's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Location
    bukit batok
    Posts
    5,468

    Default Re: Summer Time in China

    i suggest to crop away the beach, crop away the left until the start of the cliff.
    photography makes one sees things from all angles.

  10. #10
    Moderator nitewalk's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2010
    Location
    Singapore
    Posts
    4,620
    Blog Entries
    1

    Default Re: Summer Time in China

    Is there something wrong with the colour? Like over saturated or something?

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •