Korean rice wine

tolitz · 27th April 2004

Experimenting still life..pls comments!!

http://www.photonski.com/images/26556/large
(is anybody can help to attached photo here.thnks

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Aton · 27th April 2004

Overall give me a refreshing, homely kinda feeling.
exposure wise still good, silghtly over exposure on the label though.

composition wise, too cluttered for my liking, remove the potted plant in the background, the chopstick, the opener and those beads.

Think you also notice it is slightly tilted.

clive · 27th April 2004

largely there already...

for a more homely feel, try includign an out-of-focus view of the kitchen surroundings in the background?

tolitz · 27th April 2004

Originally Posted by clive

largely there already...

for a more homely feel, try includign an out-of-focus view of the kitchen surroundings in the background?

Thanks for your comment clive...i will consider that in my next shooting

was only a testing

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tolitz · 29th April 2004

Thanks for your comment clive...i will consider that in my next shooting
was only a testing ..

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Aton Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Bedok South Posts: 92	Overall give me a refreshing, homely kinda feeling. exposure wise still good, silghtly over exposure on the label though. composition wise, too cluttered for my liking, remove the potted plant in the background, the chopstick, the opener and those beads. Think you also notice it is slightly tilted.

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clive Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 2,573	largely there already... for a more homely feel, try includign an out-of-focus view of the kitchen surroundings in the background?