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Old 27th April 2004   #1
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Experimenting still life..pls comments!!

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(is anybody can help to attached photo here.thnks ...)
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Old 27th April 2004   #2
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Overall give me a refreshing, homely kinda feeling.
exposure wise still good, silghtly over exposure on the label though.

composition wise, too cluttered for my liking, remove the potted plant in the background, the chopstick, the opener and those beads.

Think you also notice it is slightly tilted.
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Old 27th April 2004   #3
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largely there already...

for a more homely feel, try includign an out-of-focus view of the kitchen surroundings in the background?
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Old 27th April 2004   #4
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Originally Posted by clive
largely there already...

for a more homely feel, try includign an out-of-focus view of the kitchen surroundings in the background?

Thanks for your comment clive...i will consider that in my next shooting
was only a testing ..


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Old 29th April 2004   #5
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Thanks for your comment clive...i will consider that in my next shooting
was only a testing ..


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