Cleaning up

[rayfoo]

Cleaning up

Any critiques anyone?

[chngpe01]

Originally Posted by rayfoo Cleaning up Any critiques anyone?

Since you ask, I will give my 2 cents

Composition:
a. Picture too centred, try to observe the rule of third. ie I wouild place the subject more on the viewer's left giving space to where the rabbit is looking into.

b. Try placing yourself on the same level as the subject, in this case prone down. Cos case, you want others to see how your rabbit looks like and perhaps its beauty, hence show it at the eye level.

c. Frame your subject without cutting off parts of it. In this case a little bit of the feet is cut off.

d. Try choosing a less distracting background.

Anyway good use of flash and exposure. What ISO are u using? looks abit grainy.

Overall a still a nice pic and lovely bunny too.

Cheers

[rayfoo]

Originally Posted by chngpe01 Since you ask, I will give my 2 cents Composition: a. Picture too centred, try to observe the rule of third. ie I wouild place the subject more on the viewer's left giving space to where the rabbit is looking into. b. Try placing yourself on the same level as the subject, in this case prone down. Cos case, you want others to see how your rabbit looks like and perhaps its beauty, hence show it at the eye level. c. Frame your subject without cutting off parts of it. In this case a little bit of the feet is cut off. d. Try choosing a less distracting background. Anyway good use of flash and exposure. What ISO are u using? looks abit grainy. Overall a still a nice pic and lovely bunny too. Cheers

tx for your comments

framing's cos of my settings in fotopic, to chade out the bottom area, settled liao

took at iso 100, the grains' prob are due to my resizing: i set the target detail at 80% only

as for the background, prob no choice at that time, cos the rabbit'd run off if i moved, hence had to take it asap anyway, but will put more attention on the framing, etc

[Pinkishy]

very cute !!!

I have a bunny too!! Yay! Another bunny owner! Anymore ?