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    Default Alsagoff Arab School

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Composition and Lighting
    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Old School Feeling
    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Interesting with the font old character and art arabian style
    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    The art of the ancient school character


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    Default Re: Alsagoff Arab School

    Composition...like the passport photo style.

    Lighting ... very dull.

    Without other supporting architecture, can't tell it is old feel.

    Just like shooting a signage.

    Lightning conductor and an eyelet should be removed.
    Last edited by cabbySHE; 20th June 2010 at 10:21 PM.

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    Default Re: Alsagoff Arab School

    Thanks for the comment , dude .

    It's suppose to be more bigger picture and yes i can feel it very dull also , thanks anyway .

    Quote Originally Posted by cabbySHE View Post
    Composition...like the passport photo style.

    Lighting ... very dull.

    Without other supporting architecture, can tell it is old feel.

    Just like shooting a signage.

    Lightning conductor and an eyelet should be removed.

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    Default Re: Alsagoff Arab School

    I dont think it is dull! Well taken. Composition does make it look like signage, but that is exactly the aim. The strong contrast of the words/sign to the light brown bg is good, and it stands out from the blue sky. Vignetting has a very positive effect here. Lightning conducter is part of the shot, if you have to take it with the sign, leave it in.


    I think with a smaller size, it is easier to see the full picture on screen to better appreciate it.

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    Smile Re: Alsagoff Arab School

    Thanks tetrflare , appreciate your comments :-)

    Quote Originally Posted by tetrflare View Post
    I dont think it is dull! Well taken. Composition does make it look like signage, but that is exactly the aim. The strong contrast of the words/sign to the light brown bg is good, and it stands out from the blue sky. Vignetting has a very positive effect here. Lightning conducter is part of the shot, if you have to take it with the sign, leave it in.


    I think with a smaller size, it is easier to see the full picture on screen to better appreciate it.

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