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    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    - Composition and lighting
    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    - Hope to bring out the essence of a protrait shot with studio lighting (i tried very long to catch the correct settings)
    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    - taken this photo when we were resting during the photo shoot
    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    - personally think that this is one of the best photos i have taken. but choose because i feel most comfortable with it.

    Pictures are not cropped or post process. 100% as its is taken.
    Last edited by knoxknocks; 15th June 2010 at 09:07 PM.

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    I think one of the most basic question will be "where are her hands?".
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    her clothes need to be plain otherwise viewers will be left wandering and not focussed on your subject

    non-full body is fine if u need to shoot close BUT why leave empty space above her head? The way you manage space can be more efficient .

    just my opinion
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    How come have to tried very long to catch the correct setting ?

    Personal opinion ;

    Could have been better without hat.

    Would prefer model to put on a much simpler blouse...simple, plain without too much pattern or frills unless it is meant to be a fashion shot.

    Careful selection of colour of dress and background, this one gives a feeling of monochrome, maybe beyond your control.

    Gentle smile will do.

    Lighting effect is rather flat, also beyond your control.

    Though it is a relaxing pose, head and shoulder composition should be good enough.
    Last edited by cabbySHE; 17th June 2010 at 03:00 AM.

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    Hi ed9119,

    her clothes need to be plain otherwise viewers will be left wandering and not focussed on your subject

    non-full body is fine if u need to shoot close BUT why leave empty space above her head? The way you manage space can be more efficient .

    - Will take note of the head space. Thanks for the comment.

    Hi cabbySHE,

    How come have to tried very long to catch the correct setting ?

    Personal opinion ;

    Could have been better without hat.

    Would prefer model to put on a much simpler blouse...simple, plain without too much pattern or frills unless it is meant to be a fashion shot.

    Careful selection of colour of dress and background, this one gives a feeling of monochrome, maybe beyond your control.

    Gentle smile will do.

    Lighting effect is rather flat, also beyond your control.

    Though it is a relaxing pose, head and shoulder composition should be good enough.

    - Took a long time as i have problem adjusting the strobe lights and of course aperture and speed.
    As for the dressing, its for a blogshop photoshoot. So i can't choose what she wear.


    Thanks for all the comment.
    Last edited by mingtan79; 17th June 2010 at 08:49 AM.

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    Need to practice more with your strobe lites.

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