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    Default Sunset @ Jurong East



    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Composition, lighting

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Hopes to showcase sunset in Singapore but needs to learn more about the settings required for each one


    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    At Jurong East MRT station while waiting for the train to arrive, I saw a beautiful sunset so I popped my DSLR out and took it in about 10 seconds.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture?
    I find it average with warm colours.

    Thanks CS members!

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    Senior Member dorts's Avatar
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    Default Re: Sunset @ Jurong East

    Hi Derrick!

    Personally, well done capturing the moment! But the photo lacks a focal point, and is just a snapshot IMO. There is nothing special to attract the viewer's attention.

    I think the colours here are fine, but with a bad composition, I think it is not so relevant at this point of time.

    Keep on shooting!

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    Default Re: Sunset @ Jurong East

    Hi Keneth,

    Thanks for your input! I'll try to find something a focus for the next sunset

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    Default Re: Sunset @ Jurong East

    Maybe you could follow the rule of thirds.
    2/3 sky, 1/3 land.
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    Default Re: Sunset @ Jurong East

    Yeah I wanted to but was restricted by the barrier on the station platform haha. Thanks for your input too!

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    Default Re: Sunset @ Jurong East

    Exposure is quite spot-on. Composition-wise, it lacks punch. But for a 10-sec shutter, this is one heckuva steady shot. =)

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