Good morning

Ah Pao · 13th April 2004

The morning sun shining down the corridor, spilling its golden rays on the floor.

Comments welcomed.

y0ngcheng · 13th April 2004

very nicely done! but i think the chair is not supposed to be there and more shoes on the floor can make us see that ppl is sleeping in the house

supperman · 13th April 2004

Hi Ah Pao,

I like the picture, but I wonder if it'd be better if you didn't have the chair in the picture. I like the way that the scene is almost totally composed of angular shapes and only the slippers and the chair broke the uniformity. But the chair is both angular and roundish as well, and since it's much bigger than the slippers, it takes the impact away from having the slippers alone.

Also, such warm lights shadows usally give a rather forlorn feeling, best suited for old/vintage subjects. The slippers still have an old time feel, none of them sport sandals rubbish, so would have fitted perfectly in. But the chair is obviously very modern, so it takes away the charm from the slippers.

The only problem I see from removing the chair is that the slippers may not be sufficiently large enough as a subject, so if you want to try the scene again, you might want to try other angles/FOV to shoot it.

Still, I love streaming lights, and all the angles in the picture are really amazing.

showtime · 13th April 2004

good use of diagonal as well as vertical and horisonta lines.

clive · 13th April 2004

i think the chair makes the whole shot look much better

13th April 2004	#1
Ah Pao Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Singapore Posts: 1,578	Good morning The morning sun shining down the corridor, spilling its golden rays on the floor. Comments welcomed.

13th April 2004	#2
y0ngcheng Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: 新加坡 Posts: 1,800	very nicely done! but i think the chair is not supposed to be there and more shoes on the floor can make us see that ppl is sleeping in the house __________________ "I want to have the best camera in the world and shoot XMMs."

13th April 2004	#3
supperman Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 141	Hi Ah Pao, I like the picture, but I wonder if it'd be better if you didn't have the chair in the picture. I like the way that the scene is almost totally composed of angular shapes and only the slippers and the chair broke the uniformity. But the chair is both angular and roundish as well, and since it's much bigger than the slippers, it takes the impact away from having the slippers alone. Also, such warm lights shadows usally give a rather forlorn feeling, best suited for old/vintage subjects. The slippers still have an old time feel, none of them sport sandals rubbish, so would have fitted perfectly in. But the chair is obviously very modern, so it takes away the charm from the slippers. The only problem I see from removing the chair is that the slippers may not be sufficiently large enough as a subject, so if you want to try the scene again, you might want to try other angles/FOV to shoot it. Still, I love streaming lights, and all the angles in the picture are really amazing.

13th April 2004	#4
showtime Member Join Date: May 2003 Location: Singapore Posts: 996	good use of diagonal as well as vertical and horisonta lines.

13th April 2004	#5
clive Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 2,573	i think the chair makes the whole shot look much better