My version of Bugis Tribe (graphic intensive)

jimtong · 12th April 2004

Hi, here is my version of the Fashion Tribe taken on Sunday at Parco Bugis.

Your critique are needed...

jimtong · 13th April 2004

no comment?

mpenza · 13th April 2004

not a bad series. I prefer 1/2 body, 3/4 or full body shots though. some of the pics showed 90% of the body, just missing the shoes and seem to be a bit incomplete (I'm guilty sometimes too).

2nd last pic would be great if the whole body is in. the focus in the last pic seems to be on the background.

jimtong · 13th April 2004

Originally Posted by mpenza

not a bad series. I prefer 1/2 body, 3/4 or full body shots though. some of the pics showed 90% of the body, just missing the shoes and seem to be a bit incomplete (I'm guilty sometimes too).

2nd last pic would be great if the whole body is in. the focus in the last pic seems to be on the background.

Thanks mpenza, I fully agree with you on the missing shoe. Notice only after all my shots

KNIGHT ONG · 13th April 2004

IMHO

#1 : fashion feels was there ..

#2 : looking at you will be better, she got the killer look ..

#3 : should take it upright
#4 : good timing
#5 : seem ok
#6 : oh yes it is good except for the missing shoes
#7 : should avoid the hand in front
#8 : should give a tighter crop
#9 : blur, your focus was on the signboard and not on the model ?? noticed that most of the images was a bit blur also ... however it is common as the model were all moving pretty fast and you would needs to act fast....

just my 1 cent ...

jimtong · 13th April 2004

Originally Posted by KNIGHT ONG

IMHO

#1 : fashion feels was there ..
#2 : looking at you will be better, she got the killer look ..
#3 : should take it upright
#4 : good timing
#5 : seem ok
#6 : oh yes it is good except for the missing shoes
#7 : should avoid the hand in front
#8 : should give a tighter crop
#9 : blur, your focus was on the signboard and not on the model ?? noticed that most of the images was a bit blur also ... however it is common as the model were all moving pretty fast and you would needs to act fast....

just my 1 cent ...

Thanks for your kind comment

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Yap the focusing issue is bothering me. not easy cos I am standing at the side of the runway and the models move quite fast.

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mpenza Moderator Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: New York City Posts: 13,397	not a bad series. I prefer 1/2 body, 3/4 or full body shots though. some of the pics showed 90% of the body, just missing the shoes and seem to be a bit incomplete (I'm guilty sometimes too). 2nd last pic would be great if the whole body is in. the focus in the last pic seems to be on the background.

13th April 2004	#5
KNIGHT ONG Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Snow Mountain Posts: 5,729	IMHO #1 : fashion feels was there .. #2 : looking at you will be better, she got the killer look .. #3 : should take it upright #4 : good timing #5 : seem ok #6 : oh yes it is good except for the missing shoes #7 : should avoid the hand in front #8 : should give a tighter crop #9 : blur, your focus was on the signboard and not on the model ?? noticed that most of the images was a bit blur also ... however it is common as the model were all moving pretty fast and you would needs to act fast.... just my 1 cent ... __________________ AMPA * Studio * J team