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    Quote Originally Posted by Tietjens View Post
    I like the second pic Love the dramatic quality!
    thanks

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    i think its easy to get caught up in the hype of hdr that u lose sight of one of the basic component of photography - composition. for one, the rocks in ur 2nd photo show much potential, and could be framed in a way that leads to viewer's eyes to the lovely light. get lower, closer to the rocks and include them as the primary subject in ur foreground. the rule of thirds also don't seem to be applied to your photos

    that being said, keep shooting and i'm sure u'l find ur own way in capturing the golden hours (:

    cheers,
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    Nice cloud formation.
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    Quote Originally Posted by divingnemo View Post
    i think its easy to get caught up in the hype of hdr that u lose sight of one of the basic component of photography - composition. for one, the rocks in ur 2nd photo show much potential, and could be framed in a way that leads to viewer's eyes to the lovely light. get lower, closer to the rocks and include them as the primary subject in ur foreground. the rule of thirds also don't seem to be applied to your photos

    that being said, keep shooting and i'm sure u'l find ur own way in capturing the golden hours (:

    cheers,
    marc
    thanks for your CnC.. find it very constructive with regards to the rule of thirds.

    Quote Originally Posted by Atlas View Post
    Nice cloud formation.
    thanks :P

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    would this picture be better than #1?

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    Quote Originally Posted by blueacidic View Post

    would this picture be better than #1?
    Yes for me.

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    still overpushed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by aspenx View Post
    Yes for me.
    Quote Originally Posted by night86mare View Post
    still overpushed.
    Thanks for CnC!

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    Quote Originally Posted by blueacidic View Post
    1. in what area is critique to be sought?

    The whole picture

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

    To appreciate the beautiful givings of mother nature after days and days of showers

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

    When the sun fades away and gives out beautiful streaks of rays for the last moments of the day. In addition the formation of the clouds was spectacular.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

    Thinks the picture looks very blissful and other composition of the landscape perspective would further enhance the beauty of mother nature.


    Welcome all CnC from fellow clubsnap members!
    Hi, the cloud formation is very nice! However i can't really see any streaks of rays from the sun as claimed.

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    #1, and the newer version both seem cartoonish, unreal. #2 is much more pleasing to my eyes.

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    Quote Originally Posted by cityhunter66 View Post
    Hi, the cloud formation is very nice! However i can't really see any streaks of rays from the sun as claimed.
    Thanks for Cnc, it's sunset, i didn't state any streak of rays. But i do have pictures with streak of rays but didn't post it up here.

    Quote Originally Posted by neech7 View Post
    #1, and the newer version both seem cartoonish, unreal. #2 is much more pleasing to my eyes.
    Thanks for the CnC

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    Quote Originally Posted by blueacidic View Post

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

    When the sun fades away and gives out beautiful streaks of rays for the last moments of the day. In addition the formation of the clouds was spectacular.
    Thanks for Cnc, it's sunset, i didn't state any streak of rays.
    Did i read your first post wrongly or did you forget that you posted this?

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    Quote Originally Posted by cityhunter66 View Post
    Did i read your first post wrongly or did you forget that you posted this?
    Isn't the 2nd picture with sun rays? I didn't posted this earlier as I wanted to get CnC for the 1st picture only.

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    #1 - The top part looks very stunning , specifically the clouds . It shows alot . But the bottom part , is brighter than the top . Its like your HDR dont really link well .
    #2 - Very beautiful shot indeed ! It really gives the sunset feel . But the rocks... I dun know . It looks weird to me .
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    Quote Originally Posted by loozhengyuan View Post
    #1 - The top part looks very stunning , specifically the clouds . It shows alot . But the bottom part , is brighter than the top . Its like your HDR dont really link well .
    #2 - Very beautiful shot indeed ! It really gives the sunset feel . But the rocks... I dun know . It looks weird to me .
    Thanks alot for your CnC Yeah have to improve my HDR..

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    2nd ...
    1st is well composed but it's too excessive

  17. #37

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    love the #2 pic, i felt #1 was over-process.

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    Quote Originally Posted by nyamnyam View Post
    2nd ...
    1st is well composed but it's too excessive
    Quote Originally Posted by iBishop View Post
    love the #2 pic, i felt #1 was over-process.
    Thanks alot for your CnC!

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    Overdone or not, I still like them!
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    Quote Originally Posted by rgborj View Post
    Overdone or not, I still like them!
    Thanks alot for compliment

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