traces of wind

Tiffy · 10th April 2004

took this on my way back to TP from macdonalds. found this windmil on top of a shop..so cuteee so i snap it haha.. im a newbie don't expect too much from me

Ender · 10th April 2004

cant c your photo.

kjmedora · 10th April 2004

yah.. cant see the photo..

Tiffy · 10th April 2004

whoops.. can't use direct link from deviantart hehe..uploaded to my singnet host

kjmedora · 10th April 2004

think the windmill is too centralised on the pic.. should be placed off center to give a visual effect that can portray where the wind is coming from.

rule of thirds?

the other windmill on the roof (the bottom one) is distracting.. maybe from another angle you can eliminate the other one....

just my 2 cents worth.... but nice pic anyways...... (despite the comments)

Tiffy · 10th April 2004

ok noted :3
has alot to learn still for a n00b

vonvonz · 10th April 2004

hi tiffy

maybe you can crop off the bottom part that shows the rooftop thing and just have the windmills there, so that it will not be so distracting. just a suggestion. ^_^ keep shooting~

tmc17479 · 10th April 2004

Nice colors tho, placement of subject is a bit off IMO. everyone's a noob at one point.

clive · 10th April 2004

composition just nice

Tiffy · 10th April 2004

hey vonz

glad to see you here

hee guess i was too short..i even had difficulties standing still taking this pic cuz the cupboard was blocking my view lol...

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Tiffy Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Singapore Posts: 108	traces of wind took this on my way back to TP from macdonalds. found this windmil on top of a shop..so cuteee so i snap it haha.. im a newbie don't expect too much from me Last edited by Tiffy; 10th April 2004 at 12:13 AM.

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Tiffy Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Singapore Posts: 108	hey vonz glad to see you here hee guess i was too short..i even had difficulties standing still taking this pic cuz the cupboard was blocking my view lol... Last edited by Tiffy; 10th April 2004 at 08:55 AM.

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Ender Member Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 1,497	cant c your photo.

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kjmedora Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Bukit Timah, Singapore Posts: 317	yah.. cant see the photo..

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vonvonz Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Jason's Heart Posts: 601	hi tiffy maybe you can crop off the bottom part that shows the rooftop thing and just have the windmills there, so that it will not be so distracting. just a suggestion. ^_^ keep shooting~

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tmc17479 Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Bukit Timah Posts: 714	Nice colors tho, placement of subject is a bit off IMO. everyone's a noob at one point.

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clive Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 2,573	composition just nice