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Old 18th January 2002   #1
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Default Sidewalk outside Rezdevous Hotel (b&w)



Camera: FE-10
Exposure: Auto
Film: T-Max 100

Just after school was walking towards my bus stop with my classmate, it was after heavy rains so floors were still wet. Chanced to see the sidewalk is so reflective, plus one or two person walking by..wat a chance!..shoot! Haaa
2 different shots intervals of bout 2-3 seconds

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Imho, would be better if the photo showed the full person...
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Imho, would be better if the photo showed the full person...
During the shot...i thot of shooting the full person...but afraid it would have been distracting in the shot itself....too many elements begging for attention.
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Erm...maybe just a shot of the reflection would prolly be better?
 
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Anymore suggestions?
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Anymore suggestions?
Hmm..

1st photo:
How about getting lower? Personally, I find the 3 pillars (?) and the patch of heavy highlights distracting.

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Compositionally, I would actually prefer this if not for the drainage cover... others may think differently though... However, other than this (and the sharpness), I like the framing better.
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