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Thread: fun with chicky

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    Default fun with chicky




    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    composition.. i was thinking whether would it be better if i took the full body..

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    i hoped to capture the boy's happiness playing around..

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    i saw their household full of chickens, got interested because we rarely see this in singapore anymore.. the kids started to play around and posed for us..

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    i thought it would be better if it was a tighter crop and sharper..
    Last edited by knoxknocks; 10th April 2010 at 11:35 AM.

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    Default Re: fun with chicky

    IMHO...
    1. tighter crop to remove the elbow on the right
    2. full body is better than the cropped feet
    however, sometimes you miss the moment if you take too long to compose.

    In this case, I feel you capture a nice moment

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    Default Re: fun with chicky

    nice moment, but the composition leaves a lot to be desired. inclusion of stray elements, abrupt removal of feet, and the framing doesn't really seem to click into place as a whole.

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