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    Default Black & White

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Composition, lighting

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Abstract, composition, light

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    saw the mirror wall and done some other shoot also, but this is the best i had. anyway the object is not on me but the tube looking thing.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    Seems like something missing not sure wat it is. Overall i feel that still hav room to improve. Is the composition ok? too bright?

    Last edited by bullseyez; 21st March 2010 at 11:51 AM.
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    Default Re: Black & White

    Lack of contrast and no clue what the subject is.

    Honestly if this is all you can describe your image with then you'll get the same amount of C&C in return. If posters announce their photos with enthusiasm then people who try to reply are more inclined to provide good feedback. You need to think about WHY YOU LIKE IT, think really hard and analyse your image. What are the things you can do better in hindsight? Surely these are things you can provide.

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    Default Re: Black & White

    like the idea but the image seems overblown :
    shaddap and just shoot .... up close
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    Default Re: Black & White

    Quote Originally Posted by ed9119 View Post
    like the idea but the image seems overblown :
    Thx. In fact i found this pic was missing something or mayb its just a snapshot. More c&c if possible. Haha
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    Default Re: Black & White

    Lack of contrast...
    Did u made is zoom blur? Corners seems to be soft.
    Cannot see subject's face clearly also...

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