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    Red face Momiji Leaf

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Composition and Lighting

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Autumn Fall

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Beautiful Leaf

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    Some of the leafs is not have the perfect form

    EOS 500D + EF-S 17-55mm f/2.8 IS USM + EF 50mm f/1.8 II

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    Default Re: Momiji Leaf

    Hello.... no expert here...

    The white thing in the background is very distracting...
    The leaves... look OOF ...
    The lowest leaf is somewhat cut off by the edge of the picture... could be better there i guess...

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    Default Re: Momiji Leaf

    wow...the bokeh looks smooth and nice...but the subject is rather soft + sm parts cut off... I like the blue bckgd+ red leave.....nice red leaves!
    Last edited by ovaltinemilo; 20th March 2010 at 01:17 PM.
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    Default Re: Momiji Leaf

    the picture does not 'stand out' enough for me.. Perhaps try a different composition?

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    The blue in the background does not work in your favour to bring out the autumn feeling.

    Having the brown thing (?) which is currently on the left of your frame as the background might have been a better idea.

    The tip of the leaf is clipped is rather disturbing too.

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    the leaves on the background were clipped off... a little annoying.
    Stop down a little at F2.8 for better sharpness as 50mm F1.8 II is naturally soft wide open

    Nice attempt!I love to take that kind of picture too.

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