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    Default Sleeping Fox



    1. In what area is critique to be sought?
    - Composition of picture, overall look and feel.

    2. What one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    - I wanted to capture the rare moment (or maybe not) during which the fox at the Zoo is asleep.

    3. Under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    - I was walking along with my teacher and friend, and when my friend exclaimed to me that it was sleeping, I wanted to capture that moment.

    4. What the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    - I feel that the photo is a little out of focus because of the objects in the foreground, even though they are blurred. If the photo is more focused on the fox, then maybe it would be better.

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    Default Re: Sleeping Fox

    crop out the brown leaves at the bottom, increase contrast and if possible clone away the wire running through the frame. a sweet moment to remember but given the location doesn't allow for a better photo.

    I don't remember fox/foxes at the zoo, is it a new exhibit or is it actually the Maned Wolf?

    Keep shooting!

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    Default Re: Sleeping Fox

    A simple crop to minimize the distracting elements should improve the image.
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    Default Re: Sleeping Fox

    hello ..

    nice picture... very cute

    maybe try crop away the bottom... and increase contrast / saturation ?? the picture looks a bit flat ...

    keep shooting !!
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    is the fox sleeping or dead?
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    Default Re: Sleeping Fox

    Try taking it again if you got the change. Another angle if possible. The fore ground is very distracting. In the general, the Fox look lifeless ... as if its death.

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