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    LOL !!! no thats not it (not the thread nor the ring) ..... those have been spotted already earlier in this thread
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    ... i'm really no good at portraits. dun know where to look.

    lemme try again...
    this black tape thingy?

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    Wow, up to now nobody's spotted or commented on the MOST glaring fault with this image...... YOU (guys) are staring right at it and still cannot see it ??? ha ha ha

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    Quote Originally Posted by ed9119 View Post
    LOL !!! no thats not it (not the thread nor the ring) ..... those have been spotted already earlier in this thread

    is it the patchy thing under her right boob? what's that?
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    how come your crop cut off just at the panty

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    lol OK, come on, lets get the honest critique efforts in !

    Tell us something new that has not been mentioned yet


    CKPs and wankers stay out of this thread if you can help it, can ?
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    Quote Originally Posted by ed9119 View Post
    lol OK, come on, lets get the honest critique efforts in !

    Tell us something new that has not been mentioned yet


    CKPs and wankers stay out of this thread if you can help it, can ?

    i think you should delete it and take more photos

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    I not good in this kind of shots but i hope to have some eye contact with the model when shooting portraits of them :P

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    There is some potential in this model, I would have her re style and to be taken under studio lighting where I would have more control on lighting, backgrd effect etc to create a moody feel.

    Unable to spot anything that u mentioned, anyway I think this pic is a misfit of everything.

    As a Mod, you'd gone the extra miles.
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    Quote Originally Posted by riotvan View Post
    i think you should delete it and take more photos
    aiyoo ..... pls read the disclaimers on the first post ..... and I DO take more photos

    ok next time i will use a male subject
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    Quote Originally Posted by ed9119 View Post
    aiyoo ..... pls read the disclaimers on the first post ..... and I DO take more photos

    ok next time i will use a male subject

    no la lol i know... i just don't know what is the obvious mistake you were talking about hahaha

    sorry, i wasn't trying to be offensive haha

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    Quote Originally Posted by LifeInMacro View Post
    is it the patchy thing under her right boob? what's that?

    WE HAVE A WINNER !!!

    Those are skin-tone bandages below her right and left boobs ...... she'd just finished an enlargement procedure 2 weeks ago (God knows why, she was already top heavy before the op) and the incision was still healing..... totally escaped me too until a whole 20mins into the shoot .

    Morale of this critique : Its easy enough to critique a poorly exposed and/or composed unpleasing image ..... but as photographers we need to see and understand an image beyond first impressions and eye-candy type distractions

    Working with a more experienced photog than me, a subject like Jay could tag-team a good photog and turn out nuclear-powered images

    Will be going through my archives to see what to throw at you guys next week

    Its been a blast fellas ! Continue commenting if you've not gotten the load off your chest (no pun intended)

    p/s Jayselle featured here..... apart from being a total babe and very easy on the eye, she is a very good person to be working with , loads of jokes and full of ideas.... very down to earth and no airs about her
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    Oh my...silicon! yikes!


    Quote Originally Posted by ed9119 View Post
    WE HAVE A WINNER !!!

    Those are skin-tone bandages below her right and left boobs ...... she'd just finished an enlargement procedure 2 weeks ago (God knows why, she was already top heavy before the op) and the incision was still healing..... totally escaped me too until a whole 20mins into the shoot .

    Morale of this critique : Its easy enough to critique a poorly exposed and/or composed unpleasing image ..... but as photographers we need to see and understand an image beyond first impressions and eye-candy type distractions

    Working with a more experienced photog than me, a subject like Jay could tag-team a good photog and turn out nuclear-powered images

    Will be going through my archives to see what to throw at you guys next week

    Its been a blast guys ! Continue commenting if you've not gotten the load off your chest (no pun intended)

    p/s Jayselle featured here..... apart from being a total babe and very easy on the eye, she is a very good person to be working with , loads of jokes and full of ideas
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    Quote Originally Posted by ed9119 View Post
    WE HAVE A WINNER !!!

    Those are skin-tone bandages below her right and left boobs ...... she'd just finished an enlargement procedure 2 weeks ago (God knows why, she was already top heavy before the op) and the incision was still healing..... totally escaped me too until a whole 20mins into the shoot .

    Morale of this critique : Its easy enough to critique a poorly exposed and/or composed unpleasing image ..... but as photographers we need to see and understand an image beyond first impressions and eye-candy type distractions

    Working with a more experienced photog than me, a subject like Jay could tag-team a good photog and turn out nuclear-powered images

    Will be going through my archives to see what to throw at you guys next week

    Its been a blast guys ! Continue commenting if you've not gotten the load off your chest (no pun intended)

    p/s Jayselle featured here..... apart from being a total babe and very easy on the eye, she is a very good person to be working with , loads of jokes and full of ideas
    Chey. And I was still thinking "if only I knew how to PP away those dark shadows under her boobies"...

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    Quote Originally Posted by ed9119 View Post
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    Will be going through my archives to see what to throw at you guys next week

    ...
    This has been very educational.
    And I think it's a good exercise to have experienced photographers throw a pic out to the open for the sake of constructive critique.
    Too bad I didn't know how to critique this round.
    Maybe next week I will try again.
    Thanks, ed9119.

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    she should do something about the area near her pelvis. looks like it's hair.

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    ed, i don't see them at all, even after you mention it. can highlight with pink pen in photoshop?

    besides, i don't really look at the boob area.............

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    Err... so is the whole point of this exercise just about the boobs or what? I kinda feel like I just took an exam where you don't get results back, and in fact, I took a Maths exam that was testing my English language.

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    Errr..her pose isn't that flattering?..highlighting her 'love-handles'?..sorry but i never try shooting models before because i'm really bad with it ..but i really love to try one day.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ed9119 View Post

    Morale of this critique : Its easy enough to critique a poorly exposed and/or composed unpleasing image ..... but as photographers we need to see and understand an image beyond first impressions and eye-candy type distractions
    as above brader wildcat
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