Results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: kids

  1. #1
    Member skrazism's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2009
    Location
    Lion city
    Posts
    14

    Default kids



    I was snapping some photos of a Xmas party and i got this. to me its a bonus. Please give me you C&C and im hoping to learn from it.

    1. In which area is critique or feedback to be given?
    In all areas. for example composure

    2. What were you hoping to achieve with this image?
    to be able to capture the emotions of the kids.

    3. Under what circumstance was the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    The kids were just playing around and i just sat and took shots of them playing and this captured my eye

    4. Thread-starter's personal thoughts about the image.
    This photo for me showed how a small boy and girl could show affection to each other. with just a simple request to play about.

  2. #2
    Member
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Location
    Punggol
    Posts
    76

    Default Re: kids

    hi! some personal opinion

    1. Good that you manage to get the eye contact of both the kid.
    2. White balance seems to be off. Too much red
    3. A tighter crop. Currently too much empty space to the left and above the subject.
    4. Increase the contrast of the pic.

  3. #3
    Member skrazism's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2009
    Location
    Lion city
    Posts
    14

    Default Re: kids

    Quote Originally Posted by SJneo View Post
    hi! some personal opinion

    1. Good that you manage to get the eye contact of both the kid.
    2. White balance seems to be off. Too much red
    3. A tighter crop. Currently too much empty space to the left and above the subject.
    4. Increase the contrast of the pic.
    Thanks will try to rectify what u said.

  4. #4

    Default Re: kids

    Quote Originally Posted by SJneo View Post
    hi! some personal opinion

    1. Good that you manage to get the eye contact of both the kid.
    2. White balance seems to be off. Too much red
    3. A tighter crop. Currently too much empty space to the left and above the subject.
    4. Increase the contrast of the pic.

    i agree

  5. #5

    Default Re: kids

    i find the pic alittle soft.

  6. #6

    Default Re: kids

    how did you achieve this coloration?

    if it is incam, i don't knwo what you did. if it is with post process, the overdominance of red does not do much for me.

    a tighter composition for this one might be better. i personally would have chosen to jsut shoot the expression of the little girl and leave out the boy altogether, if i had to shoot a photo in that moment.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •