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    Default Man in blue.

    Portrait of a man in blue. He seemed patient enough for me to compose this abstract, so I thought of making him a point of focus.



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    The blue lorry and the words on the glass panel actually distracted me from the main subject. (which i think its alittle too small)

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    yeah I thought the blue lorry sucks too... I'll try harder next time..
    I wanted the words to convey a message "spoken" by the man in blue. He delivers food.

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    Actually the blue man doesnt convey a strong enough message.....too small ....

    I guess from one look you really wont know tat he sends food.
    Plus the bridge and the walkway in the foreground...equally distracting.

    Nice try.
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    thanks for your comments!

    I will keep trying!

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    If the subject is "man in blue", then he should at least be prominent in the picture and not so small. When I 1st look at the picture I had to spend some efforts trying to find that "man in blue" in the pic...

    Ya man, keep trying, that is the spirit!

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    Thank you guys for being so encouraging.. me getting out later with 3 sets of batteries... hopefully there's something I can show and tell... hehe

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