170104 - constructive criticism pls.

sequitur · 19th January 2004

if you, or your family members, or your friends, are unintendedly posted in this post,

feedback to me and i can remove their picture

that's if they mind
thank you very much

appreciate constructive criticism.. if possible, attack a particular image.

awaiting

sequitur · 19th January 2004

seems like he's floating

sequitur · 19th January 2004

boo boo

sequitur · 19th January 2004

route march

sequitur · 19th January 2004

smokin' gun

sequitur · 19th January 2004

with a heavy load

sequitur · 19th January 2004

but where's the mama ?

sequitur · 19th January 2004

let me think about it

sequitur · 19th January 2004

an imitation

sequitur · 19th January 2004

this might not work out well

sequitur · 19th January 2004

except me

sequitur · 19th January 2004

i salute you

sequitur · 19th January 2004

or really what they become in 30 years

sequitur · 19th January 2004

at 17mm, he nearly bumped into me the very next step

espn · 19th January 2004

Nice series of street shots, well themed and taken.

longshot · 20th January 2004

Think all your shots will look much better in wide-angle or fish-eye lens (is that still wat its called?). Will give a kind of periscopic view to the picture thus bringing out the "peak into everyday life" theme which seems to be your intention with the semi-interesting subjects and artistic B&W effect.

Just my opinion.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	170104 - constructive criticism pls. if you, or your family members, or your friends, are unintendedly posted in this post, feedback to me and i can remove their picture that's if they mind thank you very much appreciate constructive criticism.. if possible, attack a particular image. awaiting __________________ my flickr. Last edited by sequitur; 19th January 2004 at 08:26 PM.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	the walking man seems like he's floating __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	it's a big boo boo __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	24km route march __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	the old smokin' gun __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	backpacking with a heavy load __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	all in the family but where's the mama ? __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	and the winner is let me think about it __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	esprit an imitation __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	a clustered background this might not work out well __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	no entry except me __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	good bye singapore i salute you __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	the perfect couple or really what they become in 30 years __________________ my flickr.

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sequitur Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,831	the newspaper man at 17mm, he nearly bumped into me the very next step __________________ my flickr.

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espn Deregistered Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Planet Nikon Posts: 22,045	Nice series of street shots, well themed and taken.

20th January 2004	#16
longshot Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Singapore Posts: 51	Think all your shots will look much better in wide-angle or fish-eye lens (is that still wat its called?). Will give a kind of periscopic view to the picture thus bringing out the "peak into everyday life" theme which seems to be your intention with the semi-interesting subjects and artistic B&W effect. Just my opinion.