I wondering if anyone saw this pix @ hwz

sunkist · 29th December 2003

anyway.. jus wanna share with people here.. and hopefully give me some comments on improving.. this is actualli my 2nd time in posting picture in clubsnap.. coz standard here very high.. so i must think and choose b4 i post...

press here -->This

regard,
vincent

29th December 2003

good but my personal perference would be to stand more to ur left and shoot straight so as the floor wouldn't be tilted which seem quite obvious.

29th December 2003

caption could be "last minute shopping before gst hike"

nihraguk · 30th December 2003

Maybe something could've been done about the faces; they look all scrunched up and blurred; unnerves the viewer.

sunkist · 30th December 2003

thanks for all helps in improving my shoot

likefunyouare · 30th December 2003

hi. positioning the coconut trees slightly to the left rather than center may yield a better composition to me. just my 2 cent's worth.

29th December 2003	#1
sunkist Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 564	I wondering if anyone saw this pix @ hwz anyway.. jus wanna share with people here.. and hopefully give me some comments on improving.. this is actualli my 2nd time in posting picture in clubsnap.. coz standard here very high.. so i must think and choose b4 i post... press here -->This regard, vincent

29th December 2003	#2
louis Guests Posts: n/a	good but my personal perference would be to stand more to ur left and shoot straight so as the floor wouldn't be tilted which seem quite obvious.

30th December 2003	#4
nihraguk Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Singapore Posts: 71	Maybe something could've been done about the faces; they look all scrunched up and blurred; unnerves the viewer.

30th December 2003	#6
likefunyouare Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Bedok Posts: 142	hi. positioning the coconut trees slightly to the left rather than center may yield a better composition to me. just my 2 cent's worth.