Results 1 to 12 of 12

Thread: Hampi Heritage of India

  1. #1

    Default Hampi Heritage of India

    7th Century Structures captured in different light.



    Please let me know suggestions or +ves about the image (s)


    You can check other snaps at http://www.jeetenge.com/jgallery/mai...g2_itemId=5238
    (I am not sure if we can post external links here. But that is my personal site.)

  2. #2
    Member
    Join Date
    Apr 2008
    Location
    Island East
    Posts
    178

    Default Re: Hampi Heritage of India

    My take:

    -it looks a bit tilted
    -a tighter crop to leave out the dark fore ground will make it looks better.

  3. #3
    Member
    Join Date
    Aug 2009
    Location
    Melbourne, Australia
    Posts
    55

    Default Re: Hampi Heritage of India

    Nice colour. I would also suggest a bit of straightening and cropping of the dark foreground and also from the left.
    flickr.com/photos/vyeow

  4. #4

    Default Re: Hampi Heritage of India

    Beautiful image. I agree with the others, I'd crop it a bit tighter and straighten it up. Aside from that it is lovely, great work

  5. #5
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    Location
    Clementi
    Posts
    10,596

    Default Re: Hampi Heritage of India

    Hello there. Nice image, but I'm afraid if you want to receive more constructed and detailed critique, you'll have to follow the guidelines for posting, found here. Unfortunately, if you don't comply with these guidelines, you run the risk of your thread being deleted with no notification.

  6. #6

    Default Re: Hampi Heritage of India

    nice try.

    but so much better if you'd gone closer, with just the tree, the structure and the sun. too much empty space here, that does nothing for the picture, and that slightly off wall thingy is spoiling it massively for me.

  7. #7

    Default Re: Hampi Heritage of India

    Quote Originally Posted by calebk View Post
    Hello there. Nice image, but I'm afraid if you want to receive more constructed and detailed critique, you'll have to follow the guidelines for posting, found here. Unfortunately, if you don't comply with these guidelines, you run the risk of your thread being deleted with no notification.
    Tried a lot, put it multiple times adhering to the rules, but never got though
    I had put some posts with the same image actually following the guidelines but that didnt get approved, but this post did :S


    Most suggestions here are on the empty space an i experimented a lot cropping the image at diff dimensions but never found anything right. I maybe have to try a very tight crop or a vertical crop to make it a little better.
    Last edited by indfo; 15th August 2009 at 12:22 AM.

  8. #8

    Default Re: Hampi Heritage of India

    other than the too much empty space I also feel about the balance problem. Look more heavy on the left.

  9. #9

    Default Re: Hampi Heritage of India

    Great colour! If only you tilt the camera a bit down so the silhoutte is only 1/3rd of the frame and you're only focusing on the tree and the statue, the picture will be excelent.

  10. #10

    Default Re: Hampi Heritage of India

    yes.. crop more of the bottom away
    Canon EOS 500D|BG-E5|18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 kit| 50mm f/1.8 II | 17-40mm f/4L | 580EXII
    HOLGA GCFN 120

  11. #11
    Senior Member jtsky's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2008
    Location
    Yishun
    Posts
    2,079

    Default Re: Hampi Heritage of India

    Nice colour! Personally I would like to see it in panoramic crop to exclude the bottom part of the photograph.

  12. #12

    Default Re: Hampi Heritage of India

    like others mention this would do with a better crop. Its too even now and the only silhoulette i can make out is the tree. So zooming in on the tree might turn out to be a better framing

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •