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    Default White flower

    1.in what area is critique to be sought?
    I would like feedback on composition and post processing. Not sure if i over processed the colours and was my composition ok.

    2.what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Using the macarons as a creamy colourful bokeh to bring out the white flower.

    3.under what circumstance is the picture taken?
    Taken indoors as a helper while the main photographer takes pictures of the flower.

    4.what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    Personally liking the creamy dreamy feeling of the picture.

    Any other comments are welcome too.


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    Default Re: White flower

    focus is off? is this intentional?
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    Default Re: White flower

    When I took this picture, the focus was on the flower and it wasn't out of focus. I processed the picture and gave it a softer and dreamy mood. Not sure if this works or should I sharpen the flower more?

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    Default Re: White flower

    i would recommend a tighter crop
    and the softer dreamy look need to be more high key

    this is the best i can do with your image


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    How about not blasting the objects with uniform lights?



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