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Old 22nd May 2009   #1
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Hello all, just got my new dslr a couple of weeks ago. My first post of shots here. Do share your comment and views. I'll be glad to be able to learn from everyone here.

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This shots are taken with my Canon 450D Kit Lens @ Ann Siang Street with a bit of simple PP. Hope you guys like it!

#1 Ann Siang Hill: the one of Bright Red shophouses


#2 Love the color contrast of the bright yellow and the white walls


#3 Some of the shophouses along Ann Siang St


#4 A look through the narrow corridors~


#5 The Screening Room~
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Old 22nd May 2009   #2
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A shot taken @ starbucks a few days ago

#6 A shot taken @ Starbucks~
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Old 23rd May 2009   #3
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Hello all, just got my new dslr a couple of weeks ago. My first post of shots here. Do share your comment and views. I'll be glad to be able to learn from everyone here.

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#4 A look through the narrow corridors~


This one is good. Nice composition, good lighting.
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the narrow corridor one, i personally would have preferred if they had walked further down, exposing more of the long thin corridor... from the shot now, it seems fat.
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This one is good. Nice composition, good lighting.
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the narrow corridor one, i personally would have preferred if they had walked further down, exposing more of the long thin corridor... from the shot now, it seems fat.
Thanks Pat glad you liked it! I guess Luntut is right should have waited a little for them to walk down further haha.
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Thanks Pat glad you liked it! I guess Luntut is right should have waited a little for them to walk down further haha.
The corridor looks curved to me ... you might not get both of them in the frame if they walked further down.... but I could be wrong. It would certainly look better if the left guy's ankles are not cut off by the step.
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hi,
do u do any PP on tis pics?
Pic#1 colour looks a bit warm, and i feel tat u may try on another way to compose the pic, cos i feel the person should not at the right bottom corner, i know u maybe wan to create a feeling of distance or wat... i not a Pro, maybe some Senior here can give u some advice...
Pic#6 looks like got some noise
anyway, good try have a nice weekend!
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i like pic #6 jefferson. LOL
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hi,
do u do any PP on tis pics?
Pic#1 colour looks a bit warm, and i feel tat u may try on another way to compose the pic, cos i feel the person should not at the right bottom corner, i know u maybe wan to create a feeling of distance or wat... i not a Pro, maybe some Senior here can give u some advice...
Pic#6 looks like got some noise
anyway, good try have a nice weekend!
Yeah a bit of simple PP. Maybe one of this days i shall head down again purely for photo taking. Didn't had much time then. As for picture 6 i thought with a bit of PP and playing around with the color tone it wont be that bad. Haha anyway thanks you for your valuable comments will work on it for future shots ! =) Cheers!

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i like pic #6 jefferson. LOL
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The corridor looks curved to me ... you might not get both of them in the frame if they walked further down.... but I could be wrong. It would certainly look better if the left guy's ankles are not cut off by the step.
Maybe i could have waited for a bit but there were ppl coming in and out of the shops so it was kinda hard if i were to wait. I realized that there are so many elements to look out for in a good picture. Thank you for your kind advise. I've got a long way to go...

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bro.. use any flash?
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Nope no flash bro all Av mode or M mode. Just trial and error haha its fun
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Old 27th May 2009   #13
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Went to the Marina Barrage last sunday. Here are some of the photos i've shot. Hope you guys enjoy it!

#7 Sunday's Family Outing~
Feels really good watching the kids there enjoying themselves


#8 Fly please~


#9 Run~


#10 Kite in the making~


#11 Its my turn to fly~
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Old 27th May 2009   #14
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I Particularly liked this shot, cant seem to describe why. Maybe because of how the shadow falls in place.

#12 Towering Shadow
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