EEEeee...he not cumming on Sat. Swosh sad.
Last edited by Dream Merchant; 8th April 2009 at 12:08 AM.
dm got canon tse lens, can be next master
What's that bright thing hanging down on her right?
The rest looks OK, but just to check, what were you trying to achieve?
Not easy to manage dark on dark. You need very specific lighting for that.
1. Exposure on the feet is off. Almost cant see the feet.
2. If this is meant to be a high street fashion shoot, location is interesting but do not complement the setup of this outfit.
3. Necklace is fine but the position of the silvery accessory lining up the left hand brings too much of the viewer attention to it. The position of the model hand could be lower so the accessory flows with the hand so that it do not dangle in too much an area but instead follows the hand.
4. Color treatment I believed u changed the color of the outfit to brown for the scene except the skin tone. The overall scene is too brown and do not really bring out the texture and feel of the model in the outfit. But becoz its a night shoot, exposure will tend to be tricky at night to get dark colors correctly exposed with model well exposed too.
Overall not bad for your first attempt. Juz my small opinions.
woo a big mouthful. thanks for the pointers kt.
trying to get used to shooting all these again been months since the last so i think i was quite off.
uhm DM, was trying something different during PP. thought that the usual black, grey palette was a tad too dull so tried a bronze shade.
The bronze is nice, I think, but what KT mentioned, gotta watch the exposure. Hiw did you light this?
anyway going to finish up some work and get to sleep. g'night~