some old random night shots..

spork · 14th March 2009

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night86mare · 14th March 2009

in general, too cluttered for compositions.

you can consider going in closer for the last one, it is very dramatic, but not enough weight is given to the man, so it loses the effect. you can actually crop it, i suppose.

spork · 15th March 2009

Originally Posted by night86mare

in general, too cluttered for compositions.

you can consider going in closer for the last one, it is very dramatic, but not enough weight is given to the man, so it loses the effect. you can actually crop it, i suppose.

thanks for the critique. hopefully i can improve with it. cheers!

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