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I like the angle of the third pic, but the movement "trail" is too strong on the left and kills the mood. also how come they seem to be moving "backwards"?
also the guy should keep his dark hand off her white blouse, very distracting. |
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sniperD, good stuff once again.
1st shot, too white washed out -again-... i really wonder if the washed-out-ness is due to the processing ?!!? but then, TIMELESS EXPRESSIONS  well done.2nd shot, my favourite and my favourite kind of shots, i'm sure you know it. but i would like it more blur... you used first curtain sync ? can actually "see" the person's face. i would suggest : 2nd curtain, OR, no flash at all so it'll be a total blur.. but you can at least see that it's humans running. but otherwise, well done. (maybe can gaussian blur the subjects out a bit) 3rd shot, been DYING to do these kinda shots for ages but am always lazy to bring a tripod to achieve the effect i want. but to nitpick abit, i would really like it more if there were more people moving about. and actually if you ask me, i would really like the subject to be dead-centre. the "triangular" shapes on the ceiling converge and point directly to the centre of the picture, and that would (and did) bring the viewer's focus to the subject coz of the lens "meeting"/"intersecting" right at where the desired focus point is. but like the previous poster said, yes the hand is too dark, but no it's not your fault, and if you know how to PS it i'm sure you can make it lighter. (i don't know how.. lol) otherwise, well done ! 
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thanks sequitur!
1st shot... hahahah ... it's a deliberate wash out... I want to just show the lady's face 2nd shot.. yeah could be better but I can't make them run 4 times up and down.. hahha... will keep in mind 3rd shot.. okie, will dodge the hand ... and this shot.. believe of not, was done without tripod.. handheld so to say.. thanks again man.. very encouraging... say, let's go out shooting one of these days?? heehee... me starting to like such kind of shots too... 
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handheld ?!?!?!??! wah good one man lol
but then 10d considerably heavier than 717 so CG better for handholding haha yeah no problem man can go out shoot but gotta wait till some COC parade of mine ends before i can go.. biang they just keep eating up our saturdays and after 5 o'clocks for the darn rehearsals.. -_- eh you use 10D leh, i scared i see already i very tempted to buy hahahahahaha
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