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  1. #21

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    Quote Originally Posted by dingzyangz View Post
    i guess its just that the title do not match the picture. most would want to see "life" in "street life". someone cycling pass or a car passing by would help to portray "street life".

    but the lines composition is not bad here. you probably shot at noon that's y the top half of the building is overexposed. i would prefer to see a complete arrow. now that you cut the arrow abruptly, it quite incomplete.
    i think i need to work on my titles too.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sweetfeetjaded View Post
    hmm, but for me i would rather keep the arrow as it shows some kind of direction in the picture. Do you think so?
    I would suggest you move backwards and get a full arrow, because currently it is sliced off.
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  3. #23

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    Quote Originally Posted by LazerLordz View Post
    I would suggest you move backwards and get a full arrow, because currently it is sliced off.
    Hmm, aight. Thanks for your comments.

  4. #24

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    nice shot...
    but type of composition and subject is over used.
    its like a shot everyone would take when they enter haji lane.

    probably my only C&C would be for you to level the picture and make the end point more centralized.

  5. #25

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    Quote Originally Posted by kooichi View Post
    nice shot...
    but type of composition and subject is over used.
    its like a shot everyone would take when they enter haji lane.

    probably my only C&C would be for you to level the picture and make the end point more centralized.
    thanks for the compliment. I agree on what you said, will take your comment into consideration.

  6. #26

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    I thought that haji lane was filled with energetic people.

    People on their music, their smoke pipe and stuff.

    I think you have overcontrast the top part of the picture, do some controlling when you photoshop.

    overall i will give you 2 upon 5

    Keep shooting
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  7. #27

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    Quote Originally Posted by snapO View Post
    I thought that haji lane was filled with energetic people.

    People on their music, their smoke pipe and stuff.

    I think you have overcontrast the top part of the picture, do some controlling when you photoshop.

    overall i will give you 2 upon 5

    Keep shooting
    thanks for your comment i will look into it.

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