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Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 18
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![]() “’Twas in my arms thy lisping tongue First spoke the half-remembered word, While o’er thy tottering steps I hung, My fond protection to afford.” — Hans Christian Andersen, Ole Lukøje This is part one of a three-part series of photos that I took of my daughter when she was a day old. I'm pretty new with this dslr thing and I was still hospitalized when I took this shot and was a barely walking, complete mess. And the shot was taken in my hospital room so the lighting wasn't perfect. Right. Now that I'm done with the excuses. I know my focus isn't perfect and the shot may be too tight for some people. Well, I like taking extreme close-ups as I feel the emotions portrayed by the image multiply by ten-folds with macro shots as such. So, what do you think of the conversion to black and white? Other comments and critiques wll be much appreciated. : ) |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: singapore
Posts: 1,707
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Too bad detail in highlights are lost, can you get them back?
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New Member
Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 18
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alright. there weren't much details to start off with as you can see from the original.
![]() but i've corrected the over exposure. thanks : ) |
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Member
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Geylang
Posts: 104
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she's adorable. congratulations!!
i love the black and white picture! |
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New Member
Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 43
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I like the composition.
Congratulations by the way! |
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Member
Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 1,563
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i must say this is a very good capture. composition was good and the execution was good as well. well done.
![]() definitely the black and white for me. only nitpick is that it seems to be rather noisy. |
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Member
Join Date: Dec 2008
Posts: 1,225
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Never mind about the good or bad, right or wrong. In twenty years time....you and her will cherish it...the time of your life.
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Member
Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: PaRis
Posts: 398
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have u tried the dodge and burn method?
i think it will look better if u do... ![]() |
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