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Join Date: Oct 2008
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hello everyone..
this picture is clicked at jaisalmer highway in Rajasthan ,India... i clicked the picture just after a dust storm.. the man standing was intestinally taken into frame..to make it real..the winds were blowing fast with dust.. it clicked it with my sony cybershot DSC W110..(the baby).haha.. a little correction is made in photoshop.. ![]() plz let me know ur comments.... ur participation encourages...
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: PARISris , Singapore
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clickety clicked.
i would prefer a more panoramical crop. i would have cropped off the sky more and PP away that object protruding at the bottom left portion. the sun flare is obvious too. I don't know if the color you went for here worked, I prefer a warmer tone ![]() |
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Join Date: Oct 2008
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thx man..will keep these things in mind..
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: serangoon
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i feel you could have placed the man a little more to the right following the rule of thirds.
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Join Date: Oct 2008
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rule of third ...plz explain me wht is this rule...
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Join Date: Mar 2007
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there is always this saying since the .com has appeared in our lives. "Google is your best friend.".
However here i like the gradient of the sky colour going into the horizon and to the foreground.
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I'd agree with the suggestion of applying the rule of thirds to place him a bit more towards the center. As it is, he seems like an oversight rather than a subject in the photo. If you don't know what the rule of thirds is, click here: CLICK ME
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