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Old 17th December 2008   #1
BlankFrame
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Default Wine Bottles Stood Still

Took dis bottles of wine in my house that i make it as a decoration...it look like d bottle is there stood still posing for a picture that im going to take..1st time took dis picture with yellow lights n using tripod coz hand not steady... C&C WELCOME ALL MY SENIOR!!

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Old 17th December 2008   #2
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Default Re: Wine Bottles Stood Still

Firstly the bottles are slanted.
Secondly your focus I think isn't on the bottles but on the wall.
Thirdly the composition of this image is pretty off.

Textures on the wall don't work for me.
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Old 18th December 2008   #3
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Default Re: Wine Bottles Stood Still

bro, you might want to change the position of your light...

And as for the wall, you might want to manipulate it.

oh yeah, u should clean the bottle wine first laaahh.... so dirtyyy...

but the perspective is great though
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