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New Member
Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Choa Chu Kang
Posts: 9
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Took dis bottles of wine in my house that i make it as a decoration...it look like d bottle is there stood still posing for a picture that im going to take..1st time took dis picture with yellow lights n using tripod coz hand not steady... C&C WELCOME ALL MY SENIOR!!
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Member
Join Date: Sep 2008
Posts: 609
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Firstly the bottles are slanted.
Secondly your focus I think isn't on the bottles but on the wall. Thirdly the composition of this image is pretty off. Textures on the wall don't work for me. |
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: PaRis
Posts: 398
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bro, you might want to change the position of your light...
And as for the wall, you might want to manipulate it. oh yeah, u should clean the bottle wine first laaahh.... so dirtyyy... but the perspective is great though ![]() |
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