Traditional coke bottle (macro)

lioneldude · 15th December 2008

Traditional coke bottle

Macro shot with EF-S 18-55mm IS Lens on Canon EOS450D.

#1

Note that: Picture has been cropped from original, which was slightly underexposed.
The Original Settings used:
1/3 shutter, F/5 aperture, 43mm focal length, ISO-400, Spot Metering
#1 (original) found at this link:

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#2 (1/4 shutter, F/5.6 aperture, 55mm, ISO-800, Spot Metering)

Note: Autofocus pts were set to the cap.

Critique on how to improve on the depth of field, any particular comments like composition, exposure, focus point, etc.

Headshotzx · 16th December 2008

1 thread per week..

skyguy · 16th December 2008

and 1 pic per post???

Rashkae · 16th December 2008

Read the critique corner guidelines. 1 pic per week, 1 pic per post, with a write-up.

PyeeL · 16th December 2008

Handshake blur.
Uninteresting composition.
Flat light.
Crumpled background.

Injustice to Coke bottle.
Read guidelines.

ZerocoolAstra · 16th December 2008

Originally Posted by PyeeL

Handshake blur.
Uninteresting composition.
Flat light.
Crumpled background.

Injustice to Coke bottle.
Read guidelines.

agree.....

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16th December 2008	#3
skyguy Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: North Posts: 499	Re: Traditional coke bottle (macro) and 1 pic per post???

16th December 2008	#4
Rashkae Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 8,277	Re: Traditional coke bottle (macro) Read the critique corner guidelines. 1 pic per week, 1 pic per post, with a write-up. __________________ Alpha

16th December 2008	#5
PyeeL Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 609	Re: Traditional coke bottle (macro) Handshake blur. Uninteresting composition. Flat light. Crumpled background. Injustice to Coke bottle. Read guidelines.

15th December 2008	#1
lioneldude Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 257	Traditional coke bottle (macro) Traditional coke bottle Macro shot with EF-S 18-55mm IS Lens on Canon EOS450D. #1 Note that: Picture has been cropped from original, which was slightly underexposed. The Original Settings used: 1/3 shutter, F/5 aperture, 43mm focal length, ISO-400, Spot Metering #1 (original) found at this link: __________________________________________________ ______________________ #2 (1/4 shutter, F/5.6 aperture, 55mm, ISO-800, Spot Metering) Note: Autofocus pts were set to the cap. Critique on how to improve on the depth of field, any particular comments like composition, exposure, focus point, etc. Last edited by lioneldude; 16th December 2008 at 11:27 PM.

16th December 2008	#2
Headshotzx Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Punggol Posts: 3,983	Re: Traditional coke bottle (macro) 1 thread per week.. __________________ Our pictures are our footprints. It’s the best way to tell people we were here - JoeMcnally \| Flickr