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Join Date: Aug 2008
Posts: 73
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Yesterday was my son's first time trying solid foods.
Photo was taken on a D90, 35mm F2 iso : 200 f2.5 1/25 spot metering Crop and Whitebalance processed with Capture NX ![]() Need some critique. Is the framing and white balance ok? Exposure? Extremely hard to get correct light as full length windows are on the right. Doesnt look sharp too right? |
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Posts: 108
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friend, you should use tripod at low light condition, I do not think this is the sharp picture.
the back ground is so irritating the draw quite some attentions. keep working. |
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: 600060
Posts: 1,267
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Cute little baby!
1 - Tad too bluish, dont you think so? 2 - Could have used faster shutter speed, since its @ f2. Tha baby was not still, thats why it looks blurry. 3- Could have a hand holding a spoon, feeding him into the frame. 4- the table top could have been included a bit more, horizontal, or none at all, if you had just wnted to capture his facial expressions. Thats all from me, based on 1st impression. I hope this was not the ONLY picture you took. I would have taken in burst mode and picked out the sharpest / more interesting pose. Keep shooting!
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Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: www.fuzzyeyeballs.com
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A tripod won't help when comes to photographing kids. Either pump up the ISO or shoot near a window (of course if it's daytime). Photos like these, don't have to worry too much about the background, as it's the moment that matters more. White balance seems a bit off ... too blue. Why not try adding the hand & spoon in the frame, as it will say more about first time he's having solid food?
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Punggol
Posts: 10,782
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higher ISO will be better, you will be able to prevent out of focus or movement, noisy pictures are not really that terrible.
for such situation is do custom WB, you will get closer to original skin tone. since the baby is stay still in one place only, just use manual exposure is far better auto exposure. |
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Posts: 73
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will try manual exposure thanks for comments ![]() |
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Posts: 551
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i think you're missing one vital thing.
FOOD! |
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Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 3,716
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Cute baby...
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