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Old 14th December 2008   #1
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Default Angry Baby

Hi all,

I took this photo last Sunday when my niece visited us in the afternoon. She got angry pretty easily and will start crying like mad.
This is a shoot taken right before she got into her temper.
Edited to added blur and vignetting to create a I-am-really-angry and let-me-be-alone kind of feeling.

This photo was taken with:
Canon 40D w EF 50mm II
Aperture: f/1.8
Exposure: 1/30s
ISO: 400



C&C most welcome.
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Old 14th December 2008   #2
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1- I would prefer a tighter crop to show more of his facial expressions.
2- Why blur? I thought I saw the tears in his eyes... would be great if I could see them clearly.
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Old 14th December 2008   #3
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Originally Posted by cheguthamrin View Post
1- I would prefer a tighter crop to show more of his facial expressions.
2- Why blur? I thought I saw the tears in his eyes... would be great if I could see them clearly.
Thanks cheguthamrin.
The blur is added around the face so as to create a "leading-in" effect towards the frown.
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Old 15th December 2008   #4
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Heheh cute baby... I would remove the blur and give a tighter crop instead, cause the blur doesnt look natural.. Even without the blur, the frown is already eye-catching
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Old 15th December 2008   #5
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Originally Posted by lypklypk View Post
Heheh cute baby... I would remove the blur and give a tighter crop instead, cause the blur doesnt look natural.. Even without the blur, the frown is already eye-catching
Thanks lypklypk. Point noted.
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Old 15th December 2008   #6
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I dont know if the others would agree with me but I would prefer the picture to be more of a warmer tone. It somehow suits babies better because of their light skin tone. Maybe you might wana post process it in PS... Also, the baby seems upset, not angry. Just my 2 cents.
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Old 15th December 2008   #7
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yes i agree with the warmer tone... i think will look nicer
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I prefer more crop, centralize baby "red" nose. Perhaps tweaking a little to baby right side face will help to enhance frown on right eye brown. But keep the red nose center. HHhaha
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Old 15th December 2008   #9
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Originally Posted by 3in1c View Post
I prefer more crop, centralize baby "red" nose. Perhaps tweaking a little to baby right side face will help to enhance frown on right eye brown. But keep the red nose center. HHhaha
Thanks 3in1c. I will try that tonight will i get home.

Originally Posted by lordpain View Post
I dont know if the others would agree with me but I would prefer the picture to be more of a warmer tone. It somehow suits babies better because of their light skin tone. Maybe you might wana post process it in PS... Also, the baby seems upset, not angry. Just my 2 cents.
Good idea to process in with a warmer tone. Thanks lordpain.
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