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Old 6th December 2008   #1
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Default Glorious Dead

This photo was taken beside the Padang. Exact name of the monument I did not take note.
This is my first time seeing this monument, so I decided to try my hands on this.
Comments on the composition of the photo?
Also. the colour treatment? Would it have been better if I gave it a blue-ish tinge instead?
Taken with a K800i.
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Old 8th December 2008   #2
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Default Re: Glorious Dead

a little too tight for me. the angle is worth exploring, but the composition here is weird. maybe if there weren't any trees peeking over the right extension it might work, but there are trees peeking over so that spoils it somewhat.

it is not a bad try considering the equipment used.
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