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Old 9th September 2003   #1
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Default My first ring pillow shot



Took this photo for Crysania for her website. How does it look? Comments are appreciated!
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Thanks for your help!
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hmm.. looks alittle underexposed... maybe can try a little lower angle and placing the pillow more towards the top right hand of composition frame?

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Old 9th September 2003   #4
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Originally Posted by SniperD
hmm.. looks alittle underexposed... maybe can try a little lower angle and placing the pillow more towards towards the top right hand of cpomposition frame?

just my 2 cts
Thanks! It is definitely worth more than 2cts to me!

I will try again with that in mind when she completes her next pillow!
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Hope you dun mind crysania... heh heh heh... noticed that on your website, the shots looked a little underexposed so I took one to try out how much it can be pushed...

Actually wanted to try a crop but not much space for me to play with.. so I just adjusted the exposure levels...
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Besides the ring pillow posted, the rest were taken by me. Is it underexposed? Because I used lamp to shine at it leh.
I'm also trying to get the colour as close to original as possible.
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yupz, a little underexposed
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exposure is relative and subjective to a certain degree...dun you think?
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Originally Posted by GitS
exposure is relative and subjective to a certain degree...dun you think?

true also... to protray a certain feel... hee hee.. thanks for the reminder... too commercial liao my thinking...
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Originally Posted by GitS
exposure is relative and subjective to a certain degree...dun you think?
Hmmm... think I want it to have a romantic feel...
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sorry to say this but yes, the original image was slightly under, but the modified shot is over.
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Originally Posted by SniperD
Hope you dun mind crysania... heh heh heh... noticed that on your website, the shots looked a little underexposed so I took one to try out how much it can be pushed...

Actually wanted to try a crop but not much space for me to play with.. so I just adjusted the exposure levels...

Nice try Sniper.


Crysania, hope you dun mind too. A mid variation between Sniper and yours. I've preserved the colour of the pillow.



As said, your pix is little under exposed. Sniper's version would be right and perfect if your pillow is white instead of pearl white.

What lighting did you use for the photos?
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good work mocha.
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Originally Posted by GitS
exposure is relative and subjective to a certain degree...dun you think?
Abolutely right, except in this case, it is definitely underexposed. Also, the composition could be improved.
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OT a bit: heehee.... my take




sorry, not muct time. Simply did

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