Rise of the Sun

wiLLy-LucifeR · 29th November 2008

taken this on a saturday morning from my abode.

colours are slightly adjusted for saturation. c&c welcomed!

dxsibo · 29th November 2008

i think the wb is wrong.......

sprintist · 29th November 2008

love the composition alot and natural framing of the clouds but please lose the artificial frame.

lkkang · 29th November 2008

good shot, I like the color alot .

no framing please ... I am going to vomit liao..

kuantoh · 29th November 2008

Dynamic skies and wonderful colors. As all others have said, juz lose the frame. Otherwise nice shot.

wiLLy-LucifeR · 30th November 2008

thanks for the comments guys.

took note abt the frame, n hav uploaded a newer version of it!

crucio · 30th November 2008

love the compo mate!

spartacus.ret · 30th November 2008

i think there's too much sky.

night86mare · 30th November 2008

what did the frame look like?

not my favourite type of palette, the sky is looking dirty and tired

something more blue/red or magenta/red will work better, i feel

greenish tones almost never work for me, or for most people

roentarre · 30th November 2008

Stunning work in deed

wiLLy-LucifeR · 1st December 2008

thanks guys, for the comments.

took note abt the colours, n hav tried adjusting towards the blue n magenta levels. wonder if it's much better now?

gunawan · 2nd December 2008

erm, pardon me, but where's the frame?

gunawan · 2nd December 2008

erm, pardon me, but where's the frame?

giantcanopy · 2nd December 2008

Originally Posted by gunawan

erm, pardon me, but where's the frame?

The thread starter uploaded a revised version already

nemesis32 · 2nd December 2008

nice shot... contrary to what was said, i think the composition of having more sky is fine since it's the most attractive element in this shot.

29th November 2008	#1
wiLLy-LucifeR Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Woodlands Posts: 270	Rise of the Sun taken this on a saturday morning from my abode. colours are slightly adjusted for saturation. c&c welcomed! __________________ \|[ Nikon D60 ]\|[ AF-S 18-55mm VR ]\|[ AF-S 55-200mm VR ]\|[ AF 50mm f/1.8D ]\|[ AF-S 35mm f/1.8G ]\| Last edited by wiLLy-LucifeR; 1st December 2008 at 04:20 PM.

29th November 2008	#2
dxsibo Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Sembawang Posts: 536	Re: Rise of the Sun i think the wb is wrong....... __________________ View My Flickr™

29th November 2008	#3
sprintist Member/Tangshooter Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Singapore, western area Posts: 5,082	Re: Rise of the Sun love the composition alot and natural framing of the clouds but please lose the artificial frame. __________________ eyeamseeingthings . dreamstime

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lkkang Member/Tangshooter Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Punggol 21 Posts: 1,600	Re: Rise of the Sun good shot, I like the color alot . no framing please ... I am going to vomit liao.. __________________ [stock] \| [blog]

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kuantoh Member/Tangshooter Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Pasir Ris / Tampines Posts: 2,947	Re: Rise of the Sun Dynamic skies and wonderful colors. As all others have said, juz lose the frame. Otherwise nice shot. __________________ wWw.LiFeSaLoNgJoUrNeY.cOm

30th November 2008	#6
wiLLy-LucifeR Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Woodlands Posts: 270	Re: Rise of the Sun thanks for the comments guys. took note abt the frame, n hav uploaded a newer version of it! __________________ \|[ Nikon D60 ]\|[ AF-S 18-55mm VR ]\|[ AF-S 55-200mm VR ]\|[ AF 50mm f/1.8D ]\|[ AF-S 35mm f/1.8G ]\|

30th November 2008	#7
crucio Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 242	Re: Rise of the Sun love the compo mate! __________________ Let there be Light.

30th November 2008	#8
spartacus.ret Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 2,356	Re: Rise of the Sun i think there's too much sky.

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night86mare Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: in your mind Posts: 19,283	Re: Rise of the Sun what did the frame look like? not my favourite type of palette, the sky is looking dirty and tired something more blue/red or magenta/red will work better, i feel greenish tones almost never work for me, or for most people __________________ Gallery \| Dreamscapes 09 Pentaxian 伪君子之所以更可憎

30th November 2008	#10
roentarre Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 376	Re: Rise of the Sun Stunning work in deed __________________ My Website Themes 50mm Photos

1st December 2008	#11
wiLLy-LucifeR Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Woodlands Posts: 270	Re: Rise of the Sun thanks guys, for the comments. took note abt the colours, n hav tried adjusting towards the blue n magenta levels. wonder if it's much better now? __________________ \|[ Nikon D60 ]\|[ AF-S 18-55mm VR ]\|[ AF-S 55-200mm VR ]\|[ AF 50mm f/1.8D ]\|[ AF-S 35mm f/1.8G ]\|

2nd December 2008	#12
gunawan Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 321	Re: Rise of the Sun erm, pardon me, but where's the frame?

2nd December 2008	#15
nemesis32 Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Singapore Posts: 3,476	Re: Rise of the Sun nice shot... contrary to what was said, i think the composition of having more sky is fine since it's the most attractive element in this shot.