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    Shot this crane with sunrise as background.

    Is the PP done on blue too much?
    Does it look underexposed?

    Any other comment would be greatly appreciated.


    Cheers

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    picture is still a bit underexposed, i would think. the blues are a little murky and i'm not sure if you saturated them, but they are looking much too deep in tone.

    maybe pump it up half a stop.

    sometimes, less is more - the blackness at the bottom is not appealing to me, and is not a good example of negative space. i would go in closer.

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    Quote Originally Posted by night86mare View Post
    picture is still a bit underexposed, i would think. the blues are a little murky and i'm not sure if you saturated them, but they are looking much too deep in tone.

    maybe pump it up half a stop.

    sometimes, less is more - the blackness at the bottom is not appealing to me, and is not a good example of negative space. i would go in closer.
    Agree with you.
    Having similar shots like this many many times, I learnt to make less use of the lower part - usually the darker part to only about 10% across. The crane, which may be an interesting object; but a silhouette against the dark blue may not fit well, compared to a clearer orangy background.

    Yes the blue seems saturated, but thats the way I would have done it myself, to my preference.
    Already abused my D40 and D80 for my flickr

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    thanks for the comment guys =)

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    Nice cloudscape but would be nicer if the crane was made to stand out against an orange background as cheguthamrin said.

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    but they are looking much too deep in tone.
    IMHO the deep blue is rather nice.

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    The skyscape is beautiful
    but a lot of black spaces below make the photo look heavy at the bottom.
    Anyway, it would be nice if you can rename your title to the "The Slanting tower".

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    The blue is WOW! I love it! Saturated yes but it's so....so.... WOW. Especially the hue, you got it just right. Its melancholic yet made me smile.

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    Blue sky not so natural.

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    Well I do think the PP is overdone..very strong colors there
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    Quote Originally Posted by kazeeee View Post


    Shot this crane with sunrise as background.

    Is the PP done on blue too much?
    Does it look underexposed?

    Any other comment would be greatly appreciated.


    Cheers
    Looks good, I'm fine with the bottom actually. Probably just under by 1/2 stop.

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