wedding ring

[spacepet]

tried taking wedding ring shots... hope i can hear from u guys...

[dominator]

Wedding rings got nothing to do with IBM and mouse.

[jtsky]

Maybe try with some flowers as background. something like this

[lifepursuer]

Aside from the ring does not match with the bg, a closer crop would be better and also the ibm logo is distracting.

[clioboy]

works if the rings' owner are computer geeks!

[zac08]

Try using the box it came in....

May be much better

[denniskee]

thinking using a stalk of rose goes through the rings, "watch out for the thorns".

[teikhang]

Originally Posted by jtsky Maybe try with some flowers as background. something like this

he try to do special theme for the ring. no need every time fix with flower, wedding cert etc one

[puraime]

yeah i tot the wedding bells are geeks.

it's nice to be a bit different, a bit of flowers will be nice too. on a side note, the rings don't look very nice, the mouse looks good. just my .02sgd

[calebk]

Originally Posted by spacepet tried taking wedding ring shots... hope i can hear from u guys...

What do you want to hear? No write up written explaining the aim of your image, nor what you were feeling at the point of the shot, what you intend to portray and what you are seeking critique on. Has everyone forgotten to read the Critique Corner guidelines?

Composition: Distracting element on the right. Long yellow bar running from top to bottom of frame. Distracting element in the form of the edge of the IBM laptop. Distracting element in the form of the IBM logo itself.

I need not even say that the mouse is just as in focus as the rings...

Treatment: Nothing particularly exciting. Ties in with composition and arrangement of elements. Too many other elements competing for attention makes the shot look a little snap-shot-isque.

[jtsky]

Originally Posted by teikhang he try to do special theme for the ring. no need every time fix with flower, wedding cert etc one

Thanks, it is good to be different. It is me coundn't correlate this two items: rings and computer. To me rings represents romance, commiment, relationship. And computer represents IT, high tech, advance. I am having difficulties to feel what TS trying to demonstrates by matching this two items together. Just a tot.
Beside that, I saw some pictures with sparkling light shining from the rings in the picture they took. Is it because the lighting used? Maybe some experience Csers can helps.

[spacepet]

thanks guys for your inputs and comments... very well taken.

sorry i didn't put some info regarding this photo.

well, the couple are computer geeks for one... second the title of the picture is "Right Click"

what im trying to portray here is that the couple are meant for each other.. they Click! Rightly!


trying to avoid the "norm" in wedding ring shot...

ill try to post some shots again. tnx