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    Default [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    Hello shot this while cycling yesterday.
    Clouds were very dramatic and i was lucky because it has been raining non stop ever since god knows when.



    Shot with Kit Lens and CPL.
    I think Composition should be ok. Just want to find out about the mood, what you guys feel about and if there is any area i can improve in for this picture.

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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    Very dramatic.

    It would have been even better if you can angle it in such a way that the jetty looks more symmetrical.

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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    It gives me a feeling of 'unreachable'.

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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    Gave me a feeling that doom day is coming.
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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    i looks to me like its a road from evil side to the good side
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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    hello people, very interesting to find out all your different impressionns =)

    and i did try to make it symmetrical i took lots and lots of shots and this is the most center one i could get hahaha

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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    INDEPENDENCE DAY! can try to clone away the lamp posts?

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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    Quote Originally Posted by HTCahHTC View Post
    INDEPENDENCE DAY! can try to clone away the lamp posts?
    I feel that the lamp posts are not exactly detrimental, nor very distracting to the image.

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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    How was it in colour?
    Maybe I'm just a colour person la...
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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    The sky.... looks a bit artificial, unless u doing purposely

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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    i think with colour will be better, w/o it the photo looks dull and lifeless. just my opinion

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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    Would be interested to see the original shot in colour instead. The top part of the clouds looks very contrasty, was that done artificially?
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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    nice. what set up was used?

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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    Quote Originally Posted by skyline1088 View Post
    nice. what set up was used?
    There we go.

    Quote Originally Posted by iamryansaw View Post
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    Shot with Kit Lens and CPL.
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    Default Re: [IamRyan] : Bedok Jetty

    prefer a 16: 9 crop here - since the top part of the sky is not that essential in the picture.

    note the horizon tilt and the converging verticals. these are little things that can be corrected easily to make your picture better.

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    it looks like a bridge linking to a faraway unknown.
    i agree with night86mare. If you can crop it to 16:9, the output will be better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jeronleow View Post
    Gave me a feeling that doom day is coming.
    Isn't doomsday alrd here? at least in the financial markets.... lol...

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