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    Hi guys...my first serious attempt at abstract photography. Any comments will be greatly appreciated. These pics were all taken at Neo Tew Rd. The abandoned HDB estate.








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    I dont know about the technical stuff.. but artistically, you have done a great work I like the first pic particularly.
    I am really impressed.
    You have the 'eye'.
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    Me like the first pic too

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    i think the shots work together. they look like close-ups of parts of the estate. seen together, you can get a feel of the texture of the place.

    the tile shots look a bit like mondrian.

    singly, the shots don't seem that striking to me.

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    Hi...thanks for all your valuable comments. I have put them together thru photoshop. What do you guys think?


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    1. your pics are so large, take v long to download. maybe you could downsize them?

    2. mondrian was an artist. mainly exploring colours, lines, proportions.

    3. i think your pics have a gritty feel. thus the clean lines of your collage design (the black & red lines) don't really go with them. try something more rough-edged.

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    Originally posted by iamasaint
    By the way...what is mondrian?
    He is a abstract artist born in 1872-1944. Some of his famous work is the composition in colours and line ( The concept used in the city link underpass )

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    these are good shots. u have a keen eye.

    what setup are u using?

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    Hi all,

    yes I have to agree the montage of pics don't work too well do they Thanks for the kind comments and critiques and those info abt Mondrian!

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